Please carefully read the attached pdf file which is a Summary and critiques Essay and do a complete peer review sheet by answering all the questions in the attached word doc. Please explain your answers fully and be specific by trying to relate to the essay. Thank you.
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1. Rate the strength of this paper’s thesis.
very weak
very strong
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2. Does the thesis preview the organizational plan of the paper?
3. Does the essay follow this organizational plan?
4. Is the writer’s thesis clearly stated, and does it state the writer’s agreement or disagreement with the
ideas of the source essay? make suggestions for improvement.
5. If there is an introductory paragraph (other than just the paragraph of summary), does this introduction
draw your attention and make you want to read on? If not, make suggestions for improvement. (*Note: a
separate paragraph of introduction is not required.)
6. Does the paragraph with the summary of the source essay have the three required elements necessary in
the first sentence of a summary? Is the source essay effectively summarized in one paragraph? Are any
main points left out? Make suggestions for improvement?
7. Do all the topic sentences relate to the thesis statement?
8. Is each paragraph unified? In other words, are there too many points in any paragraph?
9. Rate this paper’s overall readabilty
unreadable
very readable
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3
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5
10. How clearly does the author express his or her ideas?
very unclear
very clearly
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2
3
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5
11. At which point did you feel most interested by this piece? When least? Explain.
12. How effective was the writer’s use of language?
very ineffective
very effective
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3
4
5
13. Scan and spot the paper for the any of the following problems: colloquialisms, informality, clichés, and
wordiness. Give a few examples of these problems, if they exist.
14. Is the writer’s thesis clearly stated, and does it state the writer’s agreement or disagreement with the
ideas of the source essay? make suggestions for improvement.
15. Are there references to the source article in the body paragraphs? And are they correctly cited? If not,
make suggestions for improvement.
16. Rate the strength of this paper’s thesis.
very weak
very strong
1
2
3
4
5
17. Does the thesis preview the organizational plan of the paper?
18. Does the essay follow this organizational plan?
19. Do all the topic sentences relate to the thesis statement?
20. Are there references to the source article in the body paragraphs? And are they correctly cited? If not,
make suggestions for improvement.
21. Rate this paper’s overall readabilty
unreadable
very readable
1
2
3
4
5
22. Is each paragraph unified? In other words, are there too many points in any paragraph
23. How clearly does the author express his or her ideas?
very unclear
very clearly
1
2
3
4
5
24. At which point did you feel most interested by this piece? When least? Explain.
25. How effective was the writer’s use of language?
very ineffective
very effective
1
2
3
4
5
26. Scan and spot the paper for the any of the following problems: colloquialisms, informality, clichés, and
wordiness. Give a few examples of these problems, if they exist.

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